My lonely bed in the morning
Makes me think,
My empty message inbox
Makes me think,
The lines on my face and my untuned guitar
Make me think,
What if?...
Brochures of vacation spots
Make me think,
Fathers teaching their kids how to walk
Make me think,
Old couples walking hand in hand
Make me think,
What if?...
What if the promises we had made came true?
What if you hadn’t said ‘We’re through’?
What if we grew old together?
What if I were still with you?
please please add a few more lines b4 the end para...
ReplyDelete@tini....puhlzzzz,,, this is jus soooo perrfect !!
ReplyDeletesory for the wayward comment thats gona follow
ReplyDeletei loved the first two stanzas .. didnt like the last one ...
somehow wished that the first two stanzas meant for something more profound... than a break up
dis is one poem i dont like myself :D
ReplyDeletejust edit the last para .. the editing will be a feat in itself .. even though it might not be at par with the one that you replaced... you might just end up liking the fact that u changed it
ReplyDelete!
just my two cents ..
*stanza ...
ReplyDeletei would ve done that if i liked the poem in the first place...dis one doesnt deserve it... :P
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